IS MY POEM GOOD OR BAD???PLZ ANSWER?

VERY strong imagery. I just read another poem on here and was disappointed with that person's use of imagery, but your poem was overloaded. In fact the point of the poem could have been lost it had so much imagery. Sometimes just writing what you mean will make it easier for the reader, because I am sure that YOU know what you are saying. I think that you exhibit clear poetic abilities, yet you seem a little naive about what a poem should be. The fact that you posted music that it should be read with shows that you think that your poem need supplementing, but I personally believe that a poem should stand entirely alone. Beautiful just because it is words flowing together to create emotion. Keep it up. Good poem. I don't care how old you are.